Needle Space Labs

Story audit

Send your deck. Get a free story audit in 48 hours.

Email me your current deck, pitch or investor, and a link to your site. Within 48 hours I'll send back one page, free: where your story is clear, where it breaks, and the sentence I'd lead with.

What helps:

  • Your current deck
  • Your website, and what you'd change first
  • What you just raised, and the hires and launches planned for the next two quarters

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Rather talk first? Ask for a 30-minute call in the same email.

Send your deck tohello@needlespacelabs.com
Subject lineStory audit: [your company]

Or tell me about your company.